Verse 1:We walk in strides
No better path to walk
Too common this progression
from "de" to "generation"
Ignite the fire
between your eyes and ears
Pretend? Can you do nothing
but echo the words that adhere
Pre Chorus:If you're strong, then it doesn't show
Cuse' your energy's wasted on
trying to keep alone
If you're strong, then it doesn't show
Cuse' your energy's wasted on
trying to break this home
It's nothing but a matter of choice
Your bitter heart, your bitter voice
Chorus:Please stop pulling the strings
In the end, you're the one who's tangled instead
Please stop pulling the strings
In the end, you're the one who's tangled instead
Verse 2:So bide the time
Her past breathes insecure
With reigns, we paved a better path
but it caves like the old
Imbued, those lips left coarse commands
without whispering a word
You're incredible
Pre Chorus:If you're strong, then it doesn't show
Cuse' your energy's wasted on
trying to keep alone
If you're strong, then it doesn't show
Cuse' your energy's wasted on
trying to break this home
Its nothing but a matter of choice
Your bitter heart, your bitter voiceChorus:Please stop pulling the strings
In the end, you're the one who's tangled instead
Please stop pulling the strings
In the end, you're the one who's tangled instead
Refrain #1:You got more than you asked for
now you ask for more
Why do we act like the servants
you've mistaken us for
Your lies interlocked
construct castles of sand
but now you can never
swim again
With conflicting concepts
you instate demands
but will you ever be appeased
with what you get
Makeshift hierarchy, amplified
dystrophy embed
now to us
you're dead
Refrain #2:You're dead
and we've humoured you for far too longYou're dead
And this apathy has proven you wrong
You're dead
But when could you ever departYou're dead
Or were you gone from the start
Pre Chorus #2If you're strong, then it doesn't show
Cuse your energy's wasted on
trying to keep alone
If you're strong, then it doesn't show
Cuse your energy's wasted on
These lines have draped a fickle wreath
If you're strong, then it doesn't show
Cuse your energy's wasted on
trying to hold your own
If you're strong, then it doesn't show
Cuse It's nothing but a matter of choice
Your bitter heart, your bitter voice
Chorus:Please stop pulling the strings
In the end, you're the one who's tangled instead
Please stop pulling the strings
In the end, you're the one who's tangled instead
You're the one who's tangled instead
You're the one who's tangled instead
Nothing but a matter of choice
Your bitter heart, your bitter voice
Nothing but a matter of choice
The bigger heart, you're "better than"
Nothing but a matter of choice
Your bitter heart, your bitter voice
Nothing but a matter of choice
The bigger heart you're "better than" 
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I'm personally much too lazy to do that unless it's a paid job(just listen to my Tim Balls-song), so it gets sour here and there...'cus I like a real voice more than the autotune making its appearance 
And shit, I wish I had some old recordings of my friend because you sound exactly like him :O
I see. I shall try adding random sounds. And yeah its a basic rip of Halo, but the songs supposed to be like that. I think for the chorus I'm gonna make a girl sing a line or two from the actual Beyoncé song. 
