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General Category => General Talk => Topic started by: Brent Murray on September 23, 2009, 08:04:25 am
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I guess I was all wrong about you guys saying that Monopolo had some bad grammar and all.
For some of you people who don't really give a shit about me (which quite frankly, is most of you!) I'm in college now and haven't had the time as of late to work on anything because of school, working at my job, and of course life problems like everyone else here has.
And although I don't hang around too often anymore because of various reasons that are disclosed. I am here in spirit! And that's all that matters in the end. :fogetsmile:
Anywhoooo...I've been taking English ACP courses to improve my bad grammar and horrible punctuations skills. And all I can say is that thus far things have been looking pretty good! I've learned so much in a short matter of time that I can go back and fix all my bloody past mistakes. Well...I found out that holly shit you guys were right about the game being a joke in the language department! Just look at what I found in a 20 minute inspection:
:fogetgasp:
007 - Get rid of comma. All one sentence
008 - No comma needed.
010 - than (comparing)
013 - If you don’t want any trouble with the police, then you know what you have to do!!!
017 - Two you’s?
027 - than (comparing two things)
033 - (no comma needed)
037 - semi-colon is needed. One is a complete sentence, the other matches it.
038 - it’s (no capital)
039 - End the sentence, continue with the second.
045 - you (not your)
048 - get rid of comma.
056 - no comma, end sentence.
058 - Capitalize, sentence is alright.
062 - End the sentence.
066 - Get rid of the comma.
068 - Get rid of comma.
073 - Leave out comma.
081 - semi-colon
096 - should be: chew over -- muhahaha!
097 - no need for comma.
103 - capitalization
111 - than (not then - comparing)
113 - semi-colon.
117 - get rid of comma.
119 - I think a sem-colon will work here.
120 - BUILDING option, (DOH!)
121 - Get rid of AND.
123 - Redo this part.
127 - Incorrect sentence.
130 - Incorrect.
134 - comma should be a period. End of a sentence.
135 - Another incorrect sentence.
136 - Replace comma with an explanation mark.
138 - Let us look at the next step.
140 - than (get rid of comma too)
141 - Incorrect sentence.
142 - Comma after mortgage.
144 - not a complete sentence, get rid of the comma.
146 - Get rid of first comma.
147 - Needs a comma at first. Then, you need a period after the first sentence.
148 - No need for comma.
149 - than (the sentence may also be wrong)
150 - Complete sentence, get rid of comma. You may be able to use a semi-colon, but I don’t think it will work.
154 - Incorrect sentence.
155 - Second comma should be the end of the sentence.
157 - Get rid of the comma!!!
159 - Comma after why,
161 - Incorrect sentence!!!
163 - Get rid of the comma.
164 - Semi-colon or just end the sentence.
166 - no comma needed.
170 - Fix this sentence. Comma should be after however.
171 - Comma’s are misplaced here.
172 - Let us move.
173 - Incorrect sentence.
174 - Incorrect comma’s. Also, there let’s doesn’t make sense.
176 - Fix this sentence.
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Wow, just seriously...wow!
That's a lot of mistakes! Although I can't fault myself completely for making all of these errors, for that I was just being a big kid in somebody else's world! I'm going to fix these massive amount of mistakes, as well as all other problems in my other hopefuls games.
This also might give me the golden chance to add some hidden cheats into Monopolo V.1.8. (Hmmmmm?) what special surprises are in store? :fogetshh:
Anyways, I like to thank you guys for making me realize just how dumb the grammar in the game actually was! :fogetsmile:
Live long and prosper Gaying Worldz. :welp:
Also, happy belated birthday PSYBURNS!!! (I forgot to swing by and reply earlier in the previous topic)
ALSO!!!
PROOFREAD YOUR WORK! ALWAYS!!!
DO THIS AND YOU'LL ACHIEVE GREATNESS IN YOUR STORY TELLING ABILITIES! [/b]
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Well...I found out that holly shit you guys were right about the game being a joke in the language department!
LOL!
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that's not funny.
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This is awesome, because I find (and I think that others, will agree!), that your post is still ironically rife with strange things, that your post is ironically rife with.
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Monopolo is good regardless of the grammar, or maybe the grammar makes it better. Don't let academics pollute your brain, Brent Murray. Don't ever change.
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monappalled et monopausing ingame inplayce by the grammaring world colrection of enrors, confirmated memberly and once against inclass downthoroughly explainating all Criticisian Murrastry. Codeine! As an imprayerment affection on mione judgmelt of mined mione mined by lections, collections, teutons. Erstwhile sate Saldonic Monaster realeisin his mistacked provenlems I are Tseeing unto Tsars which ist hissed by way of teets at origina airy Schultz Dont havelock.
The shame (you,d-d-d-d-utterunicoverskthunkthunkthunununthkk,kkkaaamstake) of a once letterproud gamedev is retaled once intopic and mockedagain through all replinedant postery.
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this is incredible. also holy shit where is that from grep
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what schools did you go to before college where you didn't learn these things because they should lose any sort of funding they get
you are supposed to learn this in like third grade man, if you didn't learn it until college then i can't even blame you, i'm blaming your schools
gimmie a name, i will do a teleconference at the next pto meeting
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this is incredible. also holy shit where is that from grep
i wrote it myself, but i don't want to give away what it is
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Sorry, but I really don't want to know about Holly's bowel movements. Also, most amateur games that I've played have a good deal of grammar errors so I don't see Monopolo being all that different.
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Grunthor you would be surprised at the sentences this man has constructed. It's.....it's not like other rpgmakers...
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what schools did you go to before college where you didn't learn these things because they should lose any sort of funding they get
you are supposed to learn this in like third grade man, if you didn't learn it until college then i can't even blame you, i'm blaming your schools
gimmie a name, i will do a teleconference at the next pto meeting
He's from Asia bro
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uh i was pretty sure he was from canada?
S4D not ONLY deserves premium membership, but a fancy new car...a licence plate with the words MONO S4D and last but not least...he's a true Canadian...but on the inside...he'll be a true American just to earn himself a hundred dollars.
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uh i was pretty sure he was from canada?
Okay than I probably got him confused with Hatuya and youtube.com/Actar576295
Nevermind
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They're all kind of the same thing anyway
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I thought you left eighteen times already. And don't think we don't notice how this is really just another ad for Monopolo.
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I knew you'd be back. =D
But here's a few things I need to get off my chest.
1. No one gives as much of a damn about Monopolo as you'd like to think.
2. "Gaying Worldz"? Seriously, grow up.
3. If you do go through Monopolo and fix all the little things, are you going to take out some of the pauses in menus?
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I knew you'd be back. =D
But here's a few things I need to get off my chest.
1. No one gives as much of a damn about Monopolo as you'd like to think.
2. "Gaying Worldz"? Seriously, grow up.
3. If you do go through Monopolo and fix all the little things, are you going to take out some of the pauses in menus?
nobody gives any damns about monopolo don't encourage him
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Didn't this guy leave? I thought he left.
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He leaves weekly.
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what college do you go to
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I'll notify TMZ immediately
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:welp:
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Holly shit! No f***cking way! This. Is. Insane.
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PROOFREAD YOUR WORK! ALWAYS!!!DO THIS AND YOU'LL ACHIEVE GREATNESS IN YOUR STORY TELLING ABILITIES! -Brent Murray (AKA S4D), 2009
These words were made for sigs.
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tell me what college you go to i want to visit and tell you stories about my life and then i'll transfer and we'll be roomates next year!
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Sorry Brent Murray, we don't need you anymore. We have Pipcaptor Hatsuya.
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monappalled et monopausing ingame inplayce by the grammaring world colrection of enrors, confirmated memberly and once against inclass downthoroughly explainating all Criticisian Murrastry. Codeine! As an imprayerment affection on mione judgmelt of mined mione mined by lections, collections, teutons. Erstwhile sate Saldonic Monaster realeisin his mistacked provenlems I are Tseeing unto Tsars which ist hissed by way of teets at origina airy Schultz Dont havelock.
The shame (you,d-d-d-d-utterunicoverskthunkthunkthunununthkk,kkkaaamstake) of a once letterproud gamedev is retaled once intopic and mockedagain through all replinedant postery.
a sad fact: only a few people will get what this is and i think they're all not postin... :( steel paladin
here's game for alla ya: unpack that quoted p-graph. find all the references. you may even learn something about ??grep??
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grep is a Dick?
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a sad fact: only a few people will get what this is and i think they're all not postin... :( steel paladin
here's game for alla ya: unpack that quoted p-graph. find all the references. you may even learn something about ??grep??
lol
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oh so grep is an old dog? I thought he was a new guy from astrojone or something. impossible to tell who tho just like with Buttkiller. I think one of them is dom or dr. funk adopting GWisms to be more palatable
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grep is steel.
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OH MY FUCKING GOD GREP IS DOOZER
DRULE CHECK THE IP'S
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I thought it was headphonis but now I don't know what to think.
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i assumed it was gz or hundley but he's posting like steel now so my conclusion is: i don't care. it's great if steel is up and about again though
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Things I know about Hundley: Smokes, reads, acid free(?), screwed over with inheritance
Things I know about GZ: codes, targs
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it's not any of them. it can't be adeline either unless he has amnesia.
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it's someone with tales of games access. it might be fredwallacs or cool snax or something but idk. i can just imagine solving that puzzle and it's wash cycles alternate name that no-one remembers
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Does anybody know where Doozer is?
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Doozer? What a coincidence! You see, i was passing Music, Art and Writing by, minding my own business, when i heard Abadoss, the Lord of Ellipses, whisper "it's me. i'm doozer."
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it might be fredwallacs or cool snax or something
shut up!! if you're serious no it's not them. no one should ever talk about them.
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grep is perg. CANT YOU SEE???
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shut up!! if you're serious no it's not them. no one should ever talk about them.
why is this? i think one of them was an editor
konix if it's you explain your puzzles.
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shut up!! if you're serious no it's not them. no one should ever talk about them.
fredwallacs and cool snax were Forum Treasures
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Who grep
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Who grep
i second this
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im grep
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grep%
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grep is how my mom pronounces grape.
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she can say my name pretty well
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ow
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I always know which topics are yours just by looking at the title.