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General Category => Technology and Programming => Topic started by: busterblade312 on January 01, 2009, 06:49:43 am

Title: ~Crying Single to the World Webcomic~
Post by: busterblade312 on January 01, 2009, 06:49:43 am

It's been a month now since I've started my webcomics. It provides daily insights for male-female relationships.

www.cryingsingle.com (http://www.cryingsingle.com)

I hope you enjoy!

Have a safe and happy new year!

Title: ~Crying Single to the World Webcomic~
Post by: goldenratio on January 01, 2009, 07:09:53 am

I didn't see any insights, just unfunny, boring and cliche "jokes." i tried reading them, I got to "you call this 'taco'" and i couldn't read any more. keep at it, but there is no substance in any of the comics. there is no insight or meaning, just old observational humor.

Title: ~Crying Single to the World Webcomic~
Post by: busterblade312 on January 01, 2009, 08:41:37 am

Yeah, I help on writing. Been really a struggle for this past month. I was wondering do you have any ideas or suggestions?

Title: ~Crying Single to the World Webcomic~
Post by: goldenratio on January 01, 2009, 11:06:34 pm

perhaps try doing a story arc. give some identity to your characters and allow them to develop personality.

Title: ~Crying Single to the World Webcomic~
Post by: Kaworu on January 01, 2009, 11:14:31 pm

developing personality does not mean ork-rape and miscarriage. Just trying to steer you clear from webcomic pitfalls.

Title: ~Crying Single to the World Webcomic~
Post by: GZ on January 01, 2009, 11:15:49 pm

i am just kind of wondering why you are doing a webcomic if you don't really have ideas, or are struggling for them. it suggests to me that maybe you should be doing something else, maybe related to writing or drawing. have you considered this?