Zeldagon


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  Hi peeps,,, I'm back
as some people may know, my last "game" was a disaster.
i thought that i could get away with writing some mediocre story and just take it from there;
well if you are reading this and you are a beginner,,,
yeah i don't know what to put right there,,,
lol anyways,

i have improved greatly with the practice (and the fact that i have no PC)
so i sat down with an idea I've had for a while,
and until i have completed this whole written project,,,
I'm going to keep updating, chapter by chapter.
eventually I'll also add in the pictures of characters i have drawn,,,
well, I'm going to stop droning on, just read and critique,,,
*attempts to bow and falls on face*

Chapter 1
[/b]General Harlem is creating a new, synthetic city of life, and is leaving the old one that has survived for seven generations behind, burnt to the ground. The only thing that survived was one building with the final soul slave, Vera. This building is virtually indestructible. Vera searches around the small cell for any clue of his whereabouts. Because Vera's soul was subdued to the seed of life that kept the city of life's nature abundant, he was no longer mortal, nor was he immortal. His eyes were stricken with darkness like a possessed civilian, his thin clothing was torn and shredded from the energy released before. Once Vera locates a manual to the laws of the true-land's nature, and also an empty journal along with an Atlas of the three "topographical continents" (meaning each was located at a different altitude, sort of like heaven, earth, and hell), all inside of a bag, he ventures into the next room searching for any other clues (keep in mind that since the building is virtually indestructible, it is equal to a prison) and discovers a bridge (portal) to each region. Vera enters it and finds himself standing beside the god of inequality, Karma, in the above-lands. Attacked by body guards, Vera is prosecuted, but they only believe that Vera is loony, so he is dropped into a nearly deserted village via dragon, where the only resident is a lonely samurai. With a few kind words, Vera is given sentimental clothing, but only after learning to commandeer a scythe with passion and technique.

That's the end of chapter 1, note that most of the stuff in there is unnamed, so i don't make a mistake later, so keep in mind that everything is yet to be named.
well that's about it, just comment and feel free to ask questions,
one more thing: the first chapter obviously didn't unveil much of the story, i know,
but i know where i am going with this.

Hey, I have a quick question. I have an idea for a game, but I have no clue where to start. Can someone please tell me what order to make my game in and how to make a better plot.
Ex: Maps, Characters, Story, Etc...
Ex2: Intro cutscene, Journey, Training, Twist, Death of close one, Etc...

Although I want it to be a lot more detailed, like telling me how you made your game.