I played through Azure's chapter today. It's quite nice, just too buggy. I liked the memories thing, if only the chapter was longer... Oh, and what's with giving the player 7000 GP when they have 1000 GP around that point? :P
I'm thinking of writing a big readme topic that records the story so far, character and settings information, minor bugs, as well as some other useful stuff for people working on future chapters. So far, the game is much better than the previous Chain Games, it's still weird and funny/cheesy, but the story makes sense!
I also suggest people working on future chapters get extra days to play the game and go through any bugs, or at least each chapter should be thoroughly tested before passing it to the next person. People who are working on chapters should also aim to finish their part before the deadline, so that they can test it before submitting the chapter.