I guess I was all wrong about you guys saying that Monopolo had some bad grammar and all.
For some of you people who don't really give a shit about me
(which quite frankly, is most of you!) I'm in college now and haven't had the time as of late to work on anything because of school, working at my job, and of course life problems like everyone else here has.
And although I don't hang around too often anymore because of various reasons that are disclosed. I am here in spirit! And that's all that matters in the end.
Anywhoooo...I've been taking English ACP courses to improve my bad grammar and horrible punctuations skills. And all I can say is that thus far things have been looking pretty good! I've learned so much in a short matter of time that I can go back and fix all my bloody past mistakes. Well...I found out that holly shit you guys were right about the game being a joke in the language department! Just look at what I found in a 20 minute inspection:
007 - Get rid of comma. All one sentence
008 - No comma needed.
010 - than (comparing)
013 - If you don’t want any trouble with the police, then you know what you have to do!!!
017 - Two you’s?
027 - than (comparing two things)
033 - (no comma needed)
037 - semi-colon is needed. One is a complete sentence, the other matches it.
038 - it’s (no capital)
039 - End the sentence, continue with the second.
045 - you (not your)
048 - get rid of comma.
056 - no comma, end sentence.
058 - Capitalize, sentence is alright.
062 - End the sentence.
066 - Get rid of the comma.
068 - Get rid of comma.
073 - Leave out comma.
081 - semi-colon
096 - should be: chew over -- muhahaha!
097 - no need for comma.
103 - capitalization
111 - than (not then - comparing)
113 - semi-colon.
117 - get rid of comma.
119 - I think a sem-colon will work here.
120 - BUILDING option, (DOH!)
121 - Get rid of AND.
123 - Redo this part.
127 - Incorrect sentence.
130 - Incorrect.
134 - comma should be a period. End of a sentence.
135 - Another incorrect sentence.
136 - Replace comma with an explanation mark.
138 - Let us look at the next step.
140 - than (get rid of comma too)
141 - Incorrect sentence.
142 - Comma after mortgage.
144 - not a complete sentence, get rid of the comma.
146 - Get rid of first comma.
147 - Needs a comma at first. Then, you need a period after the first sentence.
148 - No need for comma.
149 - than (the sentence may also be wrong)
150 - Complete sentence, get rid of comma. You may be able to use a semi-colon, but I don’t think it will work.
154 - Incorrect sentence.
155 - Second comma should be the end of the sentence.
157 - Get rid of the comma!!!
159 - Comma after why,
161 - Incorrect sentence!!!
163 - Get rid of the comma.
164 - Semi-colon or just end the sentence.
166 - no comma needed.
170 - Fix this sentence. Comma should be after however.
171 - Comma’s are misplaced here.
172 - Let us move.
173 - Incorrect sentence.
174 - Incorrect comma’s. Also, there let’s doesn’t make sense.
176 - Fix this sentence.
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Wow, just seriously...wow!
That's a lot of mistakes! Although I can't fault myself completely for making all of these errors, for that I was just being a big kid in somebody else's world! I'm going to fix these massive amount of mistakes, as well as all other problems in my other hopefuls games.
This also might give me the golden chance to add some hidden cheats into Monopolo V.1.8. (Hmmmmm?)
what special surprises are in store? 
Anyways, I like to thank you guys for making me realize just how dumb the grammar in the game actually was!
Live long and prosper Gaying Worldz.
Also, happy belated birthday PSYBURNS!!! (I forgot to swing by and reply earlier in the previous topic) ALSO!!!
PROOFREAD YOUR WORK! ALWAYS!!!
DO THIS AND YOU'LL ACHIEVE GREATNESS IN YOUR STORY TELLING ABILITIES! [/b]
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Holly shit! You guys were actually right!