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Ice Baby1

#1 December 12, 2012, 05:11:48 am

Power to the parsley
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here is the first game i made with twine, written in one night. it is full of a Dude's REal Feelings aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaagggggggggggghhhhhhh *head rotates in a FULL CIRCLE, mouth and temples tussle for dominance, I am not EVEN JOKING my neck is BROKEN*

https://dl.dropbox.com/s/w459op06zjjmu2m/self-portrait%20AM.html

it is OKAY if you want to be honest and tell me what is WRONG with it, I want to LEARN and become a better person. THANK YOU just for clicking on this thread!! have a wonderful day!!

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hero_bash

#2 December 12, 2012, 11:47:38 am

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screenshots or mods wil lock the topic, please consult the rules topic for more details on posting game project posts.

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hero_bash

#3 December 12, 2012, 11:49:43 am

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loljk

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Ice Baby1

#4 December 12, 2012, 04:03:23 pm

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shit sorry

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dicko

#5 December 13, 2012, 03:37:25 pm

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yes!! excellent game, i really really liked it. existential disillusioned slob fiction.. i found myself nodding ferociously in agreement with the narrator.

this game rules

http://angrygeometry.wordpress.com

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mkkmypet

#6 December 14, 2012, 12:21:19 am

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woah, that was rad! there were so many lines in there that stood out as particularly great and relevant. you are a talented writer! i don't know what else to say other than awesome awesome awesome. please make more~

semper games.

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Ice Baby1

#7 December 18, 2012, 05:59:02 am

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thanks very much "y'all"! it means a lot to me to hear that peops liked it....
i will try even harder in the future.

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