http://djsaint-hubert.bandcamp.com/track/gastric-odyssey
 
old track of mine but I mixed it to be as grimy/sludge as humanly possible
 
plz let me know your opinion

It is definitely as grimy and sludgy as possible.  I  can't say that I understood the piece, as this is for sure not a style that I have really even been familiar with/ever truly dabbled in so I would say that I am far from qualified as a musical peer to evaluate it fully.  I definitely got the feeling of "being digested" if that makes sense.  Many of the bleeps and bloops made me feel like I was experiencing the screams of being digested alive in HCl or something of that sort.   What sort of feeling are you going for in this piece?    To be perfectly honest, I would consider that I didn't really understand it, and I sort of felt like it was almost just "noise" to me.  

It is definitely as grimy and sludgy as possible.  I  can't say that I understood the piece, as this is for sure not a style that I have really even been familiar with/ever truly dabbled in so I would say that I am far from qualified as a musical peer to evaluate it fully.  I definitely got the feeling of "being digested" if that makes sense.  Many of the bleeps and bloops made me feel like I was experiencing the screams of being digested alive in HCl or something of that sort.   What sort of feeling are you going for in this piece?    To be perfectly honest, I would consider that I didn't really understand it, and I sort of felt like it was almost just "noise" to me.  

 
that's pretty cool if it had that effect haha
 
it's just supposed to be a strange journey of sorts
 
also dance music if you could move like this
 
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fnKApXCz5GI

I think it captured what you were going for in terms of aesthetic, but the lack of dynamics  and the all out of senses assault make it a little too abrasive for me to handle at least.  see what others say.

more experiments in loudness/harshness
 
https://soundcloud.com/supergrandmatales324/goofy-foot-lime-dub-drums-test
 
I used my own custom EQ for this