an album for my girlfriend this christmas and its hard to write in anything otherthan corn;

1:
giggling tears from tickled ears
colors hanging from the walls
hold your hands as i hold mine
youre all my bubbles sea
even if ends separate
ease your stars and sparkling fires
[oh] we will always be
we will always be

2:
theres no need to worry, not important anyway
no matter how you try, no matter how you try

settle down, let the corners flip up
carpet towel, covered in white lint

knock the knicknacks off your shelf, tumbling all around
just to get your heat up, just to get your heat up

settle down, let the corners flip up
carpet towel, covered in white lint
settle down

Lyrics go in the music forum. (Yay! First act as a mod!)

Oh, and there's two MOVED topics in the Literature forum because for some reason my computer froze up the halfway through the first time I tried to move this.

EDIT: Anyway, I can't think of anything wrong with these, other than being real short. Overall they're pretty solid.

Thanks.

The first one is very short, as it leads into part 2.
As for the second one, the second one is pretty complicated for my guitar and I cannot sing much while playing.

(As for why I put it in literature, I feel as though my lyrics are poetry, which is how I write lyrics.)

But thank you, I'm guessing that's going to be the only comment I get from this forum.