~Crying Single to the World Webcomic~

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busterblade312

#1 January 01, 2009, 06:49:43 am

Super Saiyan Sam
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It's been a month now since I've started my webcomics. It provides daily insights for male-female relationships.

www.cryingsingle.com

I hope you enjoy!

Have a safe and happy new year!

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goldenratio

#2 January 01, 2009, 07:09:53 am

now das fresh
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I didn't see any insights, just unfunny, boring and cliche "jokes." i tried reading them, I got to "you call this 'taco'" and i couldn't read any more. keep at it, but there is no substance in any of the comics. there is no insight or meaning, just old observational humor.

yes coulombs are "germaine", did you learn that word at talk like a dick school?

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busterblade312

#3 January 01, 2009, 08:41:37 am

Super Saiyan Sam
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Yeah, I help on writing. Been really a struggle for this past month. I was wondering do you have any ideas or suggestions?

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goldenratio

#4 January 01, 2009, 11:06:34 pm

now das fresh
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perhaps try doing a story arc. give some identity to your characters and allow them to develop personality.

yes coulombs are "germaine", did you learn that word at talk like a dick school?

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Kaworu

#5 January 01, 2009, 11:14:31 pm

kaworu*Sigh*Isnt he the cutest person ever
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developing personality does not mean ork-rape and miscarriage. Just trying to steer you clear from webcomic pitfalls.

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GZ

#6 January 01, 2009, 11:15:49 pm

Gythol Granditti will be out "soon". Honest.
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i am just kind of wondering why you are doing a webcomic if you don't really have ideas, or are struggling for them. it suggests to me that maybe you should be doing something else, maybe related to writing or drawing. have you considered this?

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