It's Majin Sam's birthday too...
I'll be honest and blunt. It needs work, alot of work in fact.
The artwork is pretty bad and seems like it was done in two seconds in Paint. Try at least hand drawing it and scanning it in, or get a tablet.
Second of all, as again, it feels like you're just using Paint, get yourself a copy of PhotoShop, a good font, I recommend Anime Ace which can be easily found on the internet and downloaded for free, then, using hand drawn lineart, use PhotoShop to add colour and special effects.
Another thing you'll want to work on is the actual humour itself. The jokes are dull, they've been used time and time again and they're just too predictable.
I'm not trying to brag or show off, but here's a sample of my old webcomic that's been on hold for several months. Maybe by looking at that you can learn something.
RSI - My Webcomic
May I also recommend watching the following video? It shows the artist of the popular webcomic CTRL+ALT+DEL making the Christmas issue of his comic. It's a really good oppurtunity to see how someone who's making money from webcomics goes about it.
CTRL+ALT+DEL's Christmas issue being made
I hope this all helps
Please post more Majin Sam comics or art. I lost that really, really good King Koopa comic he made and that weird Sonic picture where his body is shaped like a bean and his limbs are really long. gamesmasterjasper wouldn't exist if it weren't for Majin Sam. He is like 70% Majin Sam. Also Youtube took down all of Sam's rants about how people who play JRPGs are smarter than people who play football games and it was one of the worst Youtube tragedies of all time.
Happy birthday Majin Sam.
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