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I haven't thought about adding those but I guess I could add some local things without alienating people. How'd you know about those characters anyway? lol. (edit: if you're interested with some Filipino culture, I think our mythologies are pretty good sources for story ideas)
To tell you the truth, I've always enjoyed learning, am fascinated with all the diverse cultures, people, and cuisines in this big world of ours, and always seek to learn more, both to expand my own knowledge and to better understand those around me. This song sums it up pretty well.

As for Darna and the others, I think I discovered info on Kalayaan while looking for muscle growth fiction (something I like) and my curiosity was piqued- who were these heroes I'd never heard of? I jumped from link to link, learning about various Pinoy superheroes, then onto Wikipedia, where I also learned about fantaserye such as Okey Ka Fairy Ko!

Honestly, I think you could bring a unique perspective to the game and open new windows into the world for players; these myths are your own- who better to tell them?  So consider basing your plot, at least in part, on local mythology and culture.  You may have to explain a few things, but  it should be fine, especially if the hero's a Watson.
Or simply throw it into conversation:
Kay: You don't really think she's an aswang?
Jay:  That sweet old lady, a man-eating monster? Nonsense. Can you imagine her flying around at night?
 *Both laugh*

 Or even :
Elle: That vampire-y thingie, the one that splits at the belly and flies around draggin it's intestines, what did you call it again?
Dee:  It's called a Mannanangal.
Elle... Say that again. *Smirk
Dee: Mannanangal
Elle: Doo dooo dooo doo doo
Dee: *Groan*



And yes, some RMNers have shown an interest in adding to the chain game, but I want to make certain it goes around here first. Right now it's in Renegade's hands.
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Okay, I have vague theme idea for my next section but I would keep it secret for now until I'm working on it.

Yes the Enteng Kabisote series is a popular movie franchise here in the philippines.

Did the RMNers saw the game or this topic?
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Okay, I have vague theme idea for my next section but I would keep it secret for now until I'm working on it.

Yes the Enteng Kabisote series is a popular movie franchise here in the philippines.

Did the RMNers saw the game or this topic?
Hmm, so Maybe Enteng Kabisote would work.
 i think i mentioned the possibility to them, but i can discuss it again.Right now, however, I'm going to be polite and wait to see what Renegade does.
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*BUMP*
OK Renegade says he has the game  and has a few plans,but says he's confused as he skipped around a bit; I've politely asked him to play through all the way at least once before proceeding so he has a clearer idea of what's going on; otherwise there's a risk his part won't mesh well with the rest. We'll see what happens.
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I'm not sure if you got my last message. I played through the game and no, my idea wasn't going to mesh well. This style of game is nothing like what I'm used to working with and although I found the game interesting, I am no longer interested in adding to it. I am not inspired to go any certain direction with it (though it inspired me to get back to working on my game, which has now been making leaps of progress in the main quest lines.)
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Just saying that I really support the idea of you guys thinking about bringing RMN members in on this too. Remember, a lot of us RMN folks are former longtime GW members.
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I'm not so familiar with the community of RMN so I leave it to Terrorantula to maybe bring some attention to the project. UPRC are you interested in adding?

@terror: i'm good to go if noone's working on it curently
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While I'm almost certain my take on the Fringe setting will go its own way, I'll definitely keep GW/SW references as part of the plot. Indeed, I've merged two references into one; The Quill is now the Troubadour's Quill. I'm also thinking that Virginia's group's likely to cross path with and assist  the other teams before finding their own goal.
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Are you gonna make a go at it, I have raw ideas on my head but it takes time for me to make a working draft of how to actualy work with it so if you have something hot and ready you should take it.
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Not sure yet.
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ok I'll take it then
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wait, is there anything changed from the latest link or could I work directly on the latest version. I believe I have the version with some modifications by you on the fring uiniverse
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I started planning on a new universe, also since I think everyone would agree that the title screen was a placeholder so I made a new one.



For anyone who isn't interested on working hands-on, it's still would be great to hear your opinions, ideas, charactersyou would like to add, resources, or suggesstions whatever for the game.
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Afaik there have been no changes since what I sent you, i think.. I kinda liked my screen but yours is  really cool- it makes me think of an Indiana Jones flick.  In fact, how does  Chain Game V: Imp-49 and the Worlds of Slime sound? I'd also suggest replacing the lotus flowers beneath the portrait with a Slimefish-head fountain to better hint at the plot. ; I just hope you're actually rarin' to go on the next world. While I definitely hope to return to the Fringe world soon, now's not the time- it would seem weird for Methuselah to thrust our hero back in so soon after drawing him out for his own safety. The green mist seen in the windows of Methuselah's house is supposed to represent  slime fog or pollution- the  idea being that the Slime Zone has slime WEATHER,- clouds or fog, maybe even rain- but none of the slime we've seen in the game so far has actually been that color. If anyone manges to implement slime storms I'd love to see them.
I'll also do my best to get the word out to the RMNErs. Any time you need proofreading or other help let me know.
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I wasthinking of keeping the original title to preserve the original makers.
 Anyway, I've timelined the plot so far and honestly there's so much convolution, which while it makes sense, is still pretty overwhelming the number of characters and plot threads that shows up. But it's awesome that the catamites and unguided left many plot opportunities with the characters.

PS
I saw you had an idea for chapter iv the burning disco knight fever from the panoramas which shounds good.


anyway, for the meantime we should limit and try to develop the current characters(that encompass the whole game not dimension-exclusive characters). and try to exchange notes as much as possible. Dimension exclusive characters are the responsibility of the maker of that dimension.


Everything below might spoil anyone that isn't part of the dev team

Here is an outline I made of the main characters so it's easy to track what's going on.

NAMES OF IMP-49:
Imp-49
Alice
Remy (Rembrandt Brown)
Landale

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Khanate of Concerned Grandparents
A megacorporation fueled by greed and treachery.
Base at JICKLEBERG dimension.

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World's Greatest Grandpa
-real name Ulysses M. Gramps
-current leader
-possibly killed BIG PAPPY at the end of ch.02

General Disarray
-traitor aka G.O.P.E.'s xXBloodThanatosXx

General Hat Master Zed
-killed by DISARRAY
-will be revived by Lt. CODGER

General "Whipping Father"
-real name LE PERE FOUETTARD
-took over the proceedings at FRINGE universe at the end of ch.03

Lt. Codger
-real name McMurray Codger
-used and killed KLOTZ to be promoted.
-working with GEN. HATMASTERZED to retrieve RASTUS'S LABORATORY.

Loverboy
-suspected as spy by WGP
-(?) informant/agent

Agent Overlimit
-real name JOHNNY FIVE ACES
-a spy planning to take revenge on the KHANATE for destroying his home dimension.

Agent Frosty
-assigned at FRINGE dimension.

Shadowdad
-? ??? ?
-absorbed into Khanate

(dec. ch2) Big Pappy
-real name D. Xanatos, leader of Xanatos Enterprise
-former leader
-(?) killed by WGP / or naturally died of old age.

(dec. ch2)General Commander Greatest Uncle
-real name Rastus, 'Purveyor of Flesh'
-scientist obsessed with cloning. Successfully made GOPE POPE.
-hid the remaining DARKLORD CELLS.
-killed by DILBERT

(dec. ch2) GOPE POPE
-a clone made from Darklord cells fused with holy energy to a clone of a famous emperor.
-made by RASTUS.
-killed by Sally.
-(?)Its name might be a clue that him and RASTUS are actually part of G.O.P.E.

(dec. ch1)MR. KLOTZ
-manager of SLIMECORP at BLUFFINGTON
-wants the SLIME ORB
-killed by Codger.

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CHURCH OF DILBERATION

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Dilbert
-the High-Father.
-currently trapped in FORBIDDEN ZONE.
-taught the DILBERT THEFT AUTO

Father Ted
-killed by GOPE POPE
-transcended as ST.TED, a world-slider.


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SLIMEFISH FACTION
 based at SLIME ZONE
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Slimefish
-leader
-seems to be obsessed with PURE WATER

Mercer
-commander

Jules
-lives on a tent
-<incomplete quest>find his MEMORY

Methuselah the Old
-old guy on the hill
-helps Imp-49.

Others:
Boatmaster
Bossman
Battybat
Cook
Shipment Supervisor
Imps 13, 42, 68, 74, 88, 413, 612, 1025

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G.O.P.E.
 believed to be extinct.
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xXBloodThanatosXx
-leader
-poses as GENERAL DISARRAY


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ITEMS


SLIME KEY aka LOST DIMENSION(Mercer)
-9 keys to be collected
SLIME ORB
- ??? ?
-KLUTS wanted it.

DARKLORD CELLS
-from Ghastly Darklord's DNA from the site where OMEG struck him down. (by General Disarray)

DEF NOTE
-book of shinigami of DEF JAMS
-ultimate RAP BATTLE weapon.

CONTINUITY CONCEPTS

WORLD  SLIDERS(St. Ted)

-creatures that could travel interdimensionally.

George Bushes
-chimps injected by RASTUS with DL-CELLS

Slime
-somehow the point of the game.
-two types. Green and Violet.
-Violet used by Khanate through its Slimecorp front.
-Green seems to be by Slimefish.
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Dad, to be honest. I came up with the "Bonds of Slime" subtitle, so I'd have no problem with a change in title. I honestly think it would be an improvement- not only does it  sound more like "Indiana Jones and the X" but it actually is more informative! I definitely have some more scenes and ideas for the Fringe world, but I'm thinking they'd be better done AFTER your turn, as some of it's a bit lighter in tone and thus can't come immediately after the most recent scene/ The time spent in your setting will allow some time to elapse in mine and the pain to fade a bit. I'd also suggest using Jump in your world if possible, as the cave may turn into an aborted arc.

And I had a specific idea for the "Burning Disco Knight Fever" setting, so if you want to use  that  we should definitely talk, especially as the original plan was to have the characters there  end up collaborating with Fringe across the dimensions.

Also, you forgot one: Noel.
Here's what I've got, with additional "ninja" background details.

*SPOILERS*

Noel Claus
Class: Ninja
Member of the Fringe Division
(Current status: Deceased, spirit resides in Slime Zone)
Descendant of Santa Claus
Refugee from  Johnny Five's universe;  fled with Santa, his Reindeer, and others to a dimension parallel to Fringe setting, possibly Alternate Universe
 Former  Reindeer spy  (defected); As a former "Pizza Ninja" of Pizza Geisha, made the acquaintance of "Dancing Samurai" Natsu , close friend and former love, before joining Fringe.( One of the "Three Kings)


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Oh, alright then I though the caption was there all the time. I'll add the new one some time. Also, I would make a brand new universe so I doubt it would interact with other dimensions aside from the universal one(characters from khanate etc..), Fringe is expected to be more flexible maybe even more so than the SLIME ZONE because Dimensional Rifts occur naturally rather than with the use of SLIME KEYS so yea we need to develop it more and I think it's appropriate that chapter 3 is a slight taste of that.
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Actually if I can hold the game for a bit longer I'd like to add a tiny bit more. Also, while mulling over things, I've found a way to tie several disparate threads together. I'll post it here for consideration.

The Magi

During some of their  forays, the Khanate have come into conflict with mysterious foes who seem to know every move they make. The few operatives they managed to capture are strong of will, and even under the most brutal tortures tell no secrets, so the Khanate has learned little. They know only this: that their foes, who call themselves the Magi, are led by a trio known as the Three Kings- Balthazar, Gaspar, and Melchior- and that they seek to avenge their world's destruction. The Magi were founded by Inter-dimensional refugees Noel Claus ( code name: Melchior) Johnny Five Aces (Code name: Gaspar) and Noel's lover and friend Nasu Nasubi (Balthazar), better known as "Natsu,"  the owner of the popular "Pizza Geisha" restaurant chain, to avenge  the Khanate's destruction of  Noel and Johnny's home dimension. Though not all employees know it, "Pizza Geisha" serves as a front for the many branches of Magi abound the world and occasionally in other dimensions; its popular "Pizza Ninja" delivery service is also used to carry secret communications.
 
While Nasu worked on expanding Magi and the Pizza Geisha brand, Johnny Five Aces infiltrated the Khanate as Agent Overlimit, while Noel managed to worm his way into the Fringe Division, his true secret and origin known only to Walter. Johnny recently notified Nasu of of Noel's death.

 
Nasu's former relationship with Noel is likely to cause strain between him and Virginia when the latter comes to him for assistance. He believes the Quill may be able to  rewrite history, restoring the destroyed worlds, and is willing to do so even if it means he and Noel will never meet.

 
 
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Then I'd also like to add some little details too . TheMagi Balthazar's son Arklubeklah and his 5 disciples, Mach Fu, Chingwai la, Carman, DeputyGuy, Wangwang,  were against a slime monster of ancient times. That slime monster was actually the sister of the uncle of DeputyGuy and also owned another corporation called the Ultimate Champion League whose janitor was actually the great grandfather of Santa CLause. Then the magis are actually created by two gods named Godman and Mangod but was seperated because Mangod was superior with his amazing mystical eyes which was inherited by Big Pappy and was resurrected by the godfather-in-law of son of Mach Fu and Carmen Ladygirl. Carmen was a kungfu master and she was a trainer for the son of Wangwang who travelled back in time and made the monster DilbertTwo, whiwh was a clone of Dilbert's sister-in-law which was married to the father of Father Ted who is actually Imp-49's left hand man.
Then they made a corporation called Awesome Group and built super heroes like Melchorman.
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*feels he's being mocked* Um,  did you read the white text in my previous entry? I hadn't thought of Balthazar as the marrying kind or of the Magi as anything but a fairly modern organization.
(Consider that Noel/Melchior looked and might be 25, or at the most twiceor thrice  that, and  you have a comparatively small timeframe- especially since the Magi weren't founded until some time AFTER J5A's universe had been destroyed and he and Noel met.)
Besides, it's only one idea and you don't have to use it.
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