new song : https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/15162117/untitled%20folder/Nathaniel%20Tann%20-%20Have%20You%20Hear%20Me%202.mp3

This is cool! Your voice has gotten stronger since I last heard you. 
 
Maybe just tone down on the reverb a liiiiittle bit, it works well when you're singing with the drums but it's a little much with just the guitar imo. A couple of your adlibs are a tiny bit off too. 
 
I like it quite a bit though, it really picks up as it goes on and gets good.

thanks, working on the mixing a bit, didn't realize the vocals were quite so pumped at the beginning, will adjust and correct that.

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/15162117/untitled%20folder/Nathaniel%20Tann%20-%20Have%20You%20Hear%20Me%203.mp3

okay i messed with the vocals a bit more, although i think when i mastered the track it ended up making the beginning louder again, but the vocals shoulder be more even throughout the rest of the song.