I can't imagine that this will generate too much discussion but I was reading through the rateyourstudents site when I came across this gem. I know a few of you liked my signature so I thought I'd share this. Also, what do you guys think of the rateyourprofessor site as well? I know several of my professors say they know the rateyourprofessor site very well (apparently its one of those things that professors chat about on their freetime) though it surprised me to find that not many people know about this site.
Pedagogical Pete here again. In this week's column we'll talk about the "written comment," one of the most vexing parts of grading for new instructors. It's important that we provide timely, supportive, but correct feedback for our students, and when they spend several days or even weeks on an essay or paper, it's even more important that we take the time to prepare an insightful and useful written comment. See what you think of this real world example from one of my colleagues. Does he provide enough concrete examples? Does he make an attempt to connect to the student?
Megan, this is a first rate essay. I believe you’ve accomplished what you intended with it. The thesis is strong, and your analysis of the text is thorough, but not overwhelming.
I also love the font. It tickles me. It’s just, I don’t know, fun. You’ve done a great job with the margins, too. Broad, bold. Lots of room for me to really get my pen in there and move it around. The opening is really inviting. The narrative really flows.
What’s missing, however, is a firm hand. I’d think someone could really take these ideas and mold them, shape them. Your ideas need structure, sort of an old soul to really help them fly. I’m still not sure of the grade, though, and I think we need to schedule yet another individual conference to discuss it. My office is getting painted (again!), so let’s just meet at the Coffee Klatch on the west side of town. It’s so quiet, and their biscotti is so yummy.
See you, okay, at 8 pm on Wednesday? Do you still have your roommate’s car? Do you need a ride? I could pick you up if you need a ride, say, at the corner across from the Kroger? You know my car, don’t you, the Nissan, the big one, the SUV, leather seats, Satellite radio. I’ve really been listening to some of those bands you wrote about in your first essay, The Chins and Arcade Four. Really ROCKIN’. So, okay, Megs, this is like the end of my comments. I can’t wait to see you soon.
Your pal,
Dr. Wiggelsworth
So, now that you've read the comments on Megan's paper, please answer the following questions on your own.
1. What essay elements did Dr. Wiggelsworth put his focus on?
2. Will Megan know what revision strategies to use based on these comments?
3. What brand and model stun gun should she carry?