Sorry to bump this... I posted this and forgot about it.
I'm leaving on a trip soon, and wanted to document it through film. I was wondering now, what are the things I need to work on.
@Roman: Background information:
I did this at my school for a Studio 2 project for high school. It was a toss up between 4 PSA's or a music video. It's the only video I legitimately completely in the whole year of independent study and studio classes :P The footage was taken all off of my bicycle. I unsafely mounted the camera to a tripod, stuck a pole in it's butt, and secured it to the frame of my bike using what should of fastened a mini-bike pump instead. It worked wonderfully. I changed the angle of the shots, as I just cruised through the town on a pleasant ride.
Edited in adobe premiere pro cs3.
I choose the song because it was one of my favorites growing up. I never noticed that intersection about angels and devils, I didn't like it, so I kept the song half short - which maybe an injustice to the artist.
I showed it in a student video film show. The ending title was kind of a joke, nobody had seen what I had been working on, which was nice to surprise everyone, and then give them that title.
@ Lord Spillbury & Ragnar
The intention was that, it was slowly building - the film getting more abstracted towards the end. The beginning clouds and trees, reminded me of a storm cooking up but not the actual storm. I see more and more how much my video contrasts that though. I guess I didn't get an adequate feel for the song.