Your accent is cool and all but you need to not read the dialogue out loud/constantly fill space with constant drawn out words/umming and ahhing, it's really frustrating to watch.
I only read dialogue out loud if there's no voice acting. If I don't read it out loud and I say a joke, it makes the viewer go what part in the text did I refer, what part did I make joke about, often pausing the video and going back to reading the text over again just to get what I was talking about. When I read it out loud, it gives context to what I say. Unless there's spoken dialogue in the game, then I don't need to say it out loud and can just comment on it after it's said.
So yes, I do need to read the dialogue out loud unless the game has voice acting to give basis to what I comment if it's not a visual thing like the guys running around or something like that. But if i'ts a big wall of text, it could be of any part of it and then I'd have to repeat part of the text like I'd be always confused by parts of it.
I spose if you're playing for the first time and it's an RPG Maker it's tough to fill in time with interesting trivia and gameplay mechanics and all that.
Well, um, yeah?
And there's not much gameplay mechanics to talk about RPGmaker games anyway...
Your Sleeping Dogs one is much better than Beta/Phantasy, maybe the RPG Maker thing just doesn't work for you. I like the idea behind playing RPG Maker games but you need to rejig how you do it, it's kind of annoying as it is.
I do take suggestions! They're always welcome.
What about Destiny's Call?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o0RVGNI-DUA