I could be over critical, but I think you could re-do the story to sound less boring and more interesting for people to read. It's like, a wall of boring events that nobody cares enough to read.
It would be better to strive for the 'essence' of what you are trying to depict, and not think in a practical or literal sense. Just think about the origin of what you want to direct what you want your audience to feel.
no don't
alistair
Of course we all know I am with "bun in oven". My only problem is that I can't figure a boys name that I really like. (my husband and I are leaning more towards the muslim names of course since it's a muslim thing to do...) I want to know what you guys would suggest, all I get from some of the people I know are "think about it" or "just don't name it something stupid" or the most unhelpful "You'll figure it out when the baby comes..." I honestly believe in being prepared to the roof as much as I can be. We don't know the sex but we do have a girls name all picked out specifically for family members that we have a affinity to.SO the names you suggest don't have to be muslim but it can be from anywhere, but it would be pretty nice to have some constructive input.
ALTAIR Gender: Masculine Usage: Astronomy Means "the flyer" in Arabic. This is the name of a star in the constellation Aquila.
if you're a vegan you support baby killers
ALTAIRGender: MasculineUsage: AstronomyMeans "the flyer" in Arabic. This is the name of a star in the constellation Aquila.
ahaha, what a useless topic. you didn't listen to anyone's suggestion, even the decent ones. not that you really should since it's a net forum, but really what the hell.GOOD CHOICE OF NAME I guess.
We found a name we like, Zaki Mohammad Sharar. Opinions?