Ok I've got a large crop to help start this off. COMMENTS REQUIRED, Not requested.
Also: DONT tell I need more filler bullshit like npc, I already know. im looking for overall design tips.
Entrance to the residential district of carmian city. Each section of the city is actually underground, but maintained by the Mage guild to appear to be just like you were outside.
Portal Room to reach all the districts in Carmian city.
The Church of Yvene in the residential district.
I did some minor changes to the world map, the lines between travel look MUCH better now IMO.
A small bazaar outside the portal room. Here is where you can buy your first pet. Pets will randomly attack or cast spells when in battles. The stronger the pet the less chance of them appearing in a battle.
And finally the intro to my game. I apologize for the size and quality. WATCH IT IN HIGH QUALITY IF YOU CAN! This is what I want the most comments on. I promise that my game isnt quite as cliche as my intro!