glad you decided to turn alice in wonderland into anime

So finally some SCREENIES!!  And I mean real screenshots not just mock-ups

Could you make the Cheshire Cat look more like a (freaky) cat and less like your average anthro? Making him look that way really takes what made the Cheshire cat an interesting character and ruins it. To a point where I don't think I'd be able to tolerate playing it. I just think you could put more imagination into it, is all. Right now, he looks very uncreative and cookie cutter.
If you change anything about that game, that would be the one thing I would change.

Could you make the Cheshire Cat look more like a (freaky) cat and less like your average anthro? Making him look that way really takes what made the Cheshire cat an interesting character and ruins it. To a point where I don't think I'd be able to tolerate playing it. I just think you could put more imagination into it, is all. Right now, he looks very uncreative and cookie cutter.
If you change anything about that game, that would be the one thing I would change.

Thank you for your comment! It's too bad that you think he looks uncreative and cookie cutter, but I believe making him a cat would be just like other Alice in Wonderland interpretations and wouldn't stand out from the crowd.  If you look at all the other characters here , you'll see that all characters are loosely based on Alice in Wonderland and all the talking animals are anthros.

Not to say that your comment isn't valid. I know what you mean, and I understand your point. However, I prefer it to be like this and even though some may not like it, there are those who like it as well.  Also, the time it will take for another design as well as creating a new graphic assets for the character would be too much and I'd rather spend that time making other games.

I'm sorry if this make you don't want to play the game, but I have no intention to change the design. We'll try better next game

Maybe something similar to this...

Jaffer, it would also help if you use different color for the stats on the right side of the arrows. Something like, green for a number that is increased, red for a number that is decreased, and white for a number that stays the same.

@Jaffer: Those green numbers are really hard to read.

Added a death counter in the background of every level. Is it easy to see? Does it distract too much from the level?

the background counter is a Cool Aesthetic Decision and I dig it. It doesn't draw attention unless you are trying to look at it, and if I can see it on my dark, 7-year-old crt monitor, probably anyone can.




was trying to copy the shit out of Plok for the background, homelessperson added for scale

I feel like a dildo for posting a graphical mockup with no code behind it at all, but w/e this took me 3 afternoons and I wanted to show off. Construct has literally no support for tilesets though, so I have to build a level editor from scratch before I can do anything fun with it. Balls!!